Wednesday, October 14, 2009

LOVE TRAP

Wise men say only fools rush in

But as usual I refuse to listen

Falling in love happened so fast

Magic was witnessed and the spell was cast


Protected in the blanket of love I felt warm

Experiencing this eternal bliss and serene calm

But my dreams were analogous to the freedom dove

They never came back just as my unrequited love


I prayed I yelled I cursed and cried

Success turned blind to how hard I tried

This nightmare of love haunts me still

Vacuum once created can never be filled


Where is love’s charisma and fascination?

Glory is lost replaced with tribulation

No awards for my valorous heart

It endured pain but left badly scarred


Lord spare me from this love puzzle

Heart and mind are in a constant tussle

Please fly me away to a safer haven

Untouched by love, the holy Satan

7 comments:

  1. Its hard to see, harder to admire,
    Living contadictions, ends with satire,
    Lovetrap starts with bliss, play with hope,
    Ends with entrapped and defeated doe,
    Get her out and give her a conk,
    Cuz failed hearts can never become monks...

    Unorganized thoughts... but nicely portrayed...

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  2. thankx abhi i really appreciate ur interest in my blogs!!!

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  3. my pleasure..!!... keep writing...

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  4. bdw abhi how do u know i am "living contradictions"?no where in my blog have i mentioned it....
    u penned down some good stuff and that to aptly...

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  5. Thnx..!! btw u should not ask questions u know the answers of... thats arrogance. Check ur gmail account.

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  6. holy satan ...ha ha ha...smetimes...holy satans also fall in love.... ;)

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  7. Beautiful!!!! What books were you reading while you wrote it?

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